![]() ![]() ![]() Cal may have been an asshole but he sure as hell wasn't spineless which is what I'd say about Chris. I'm sorry, I feel sorry for the guy and all of that but gosh is he a pussy. In the previous book, not only did we have the past but present nicely being revealed as the chapters went along, it worked and ran smoothly.My biggest problem is unfortunately Chris. I must say I was kind of disappointed, I don't think much of anything happened really in this book aside from Chris/Lauren getting to know each other. Review 2: So I read If I Break yesterday and fell in love, instantly purchased Almost Broken. I can only pray that it's run by an editor or two (or three) before it's rele. ![]() Hell - I'd definitely be open to editing myself if asked! But the story was amazing so I guess I'll forgo the refund request.With that being said, I can NOT wait for the next book. ![]() I almost feel ripped off and want to ask for my money back because it's almost disrespectful for an author to subject a reader to that level of error. Grammar, punctuation and typographical errors galore - at least 5 on every page!! At some times it was hard to figure out what was being said. The writing style and plot are amazing - definitely original and emotionally gripping!! But the editing. Review 1: This is my first written review because I felt that I needed to explain my 4-star review. ![]()
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